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I really like the way I can revisit each verse before continuing on by interacting again. The placement and ordering contributes nicely as well.

I'm glad to hear that you have the energy to stand up in the shower too! Please be kind to yourself when you can, as you deserve it.

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As has always been the case with your work, you demonstrate an astounding grasp of intimacy, visceral language, and a transcendent beauty that connects your audience to your work. Thanks for this.

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wonderful, thank you so much.. i feel similar

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This is beautiful.  Love the use of a single room to create a visual poem. So glad you're feeling better, too.

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im glad that you rcovering from the eating disorder

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I'm glad you're recovering. Thank you for sharing the poem.